In order to make the newspaper look more newspaper like instead of magazine like where lots is happening i've decided to put spaces between the pictures and alot small lines which was easily done on indesign. I also had to make a decision about where the 'win a £500 westfield giftcard' should go. To help me make this decision I printed off copies of both versions of the front page and showed them to people and asked for there opinion, i made sure i asked people of all ages in order to avoid asking lots of similiar people all with similar tastes. Most people agreed that the first version on the left was infact the better design.