I've now added another article in the bottom right hand corner, after asking various people about what more was needed on my newspaper to make it look like a professional local newspaper the main feedback I recieved was that there needed to be more picture on the second page. So with this in mind I decided to add a picture to my the bottom right hand corner's article and it makes the page look alot more interesting and means it not just consant text. The other comments that were made on the paper was the white patch in the bottom left hand corner and that it needs filling. Also the banner looks too plain and abit pointless.